Feedback from Draft Three

After watching our teen-angst in class, this is the feedback we received.

Strengths:

• The editing, split screens and the three jump cuts in one shot.
• The conversations over the phone worked well.
• Cross cutting between locations to show the conversations.
• Good titles -they fit the genre.
• The narrative is very clear.
• Good establishing shots at the beginning.
• Well fitting music choice. 

Things to improve upon:

• There could be subtle music under the first scene to add more rhythm.
• The first audio clip is bad quality because of the wind. Re film or dub over.
• Music underneath the 'getting ready' sequence could fade out more smoothly.
• Make the editing more sharp, for example: the shot of Brittany  putting her shoes on could also be edited into three quick jump cuts.
• Take out the rain from under the talking that happens indoors.